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Meditation
Contributed by
ValDohren
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Thursday, 1st November 2012 @ 05:53:08 AM in AEST
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What golden ecstasies we`d find
Within the chasms of the mind
Between each passing thought we`d see
That boundless realm infinity
Where space is not and time is not
And earthly cares long since forgot
We`d step a moment out of time
Embraced in restfulness sublime
And through Nirvana`s gates flung wide
We`d see the flame that burns inside
With integrated mind and soul
No longer we, one with the whole
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2012-11-01 05:53:08]
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Re: Meditation
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 1st November 2012 @ 10:51:04 AM AEST
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Yes Val,, one withe whole in God. You are much more religious than what you admit.
A great meditation, that deals with the bliss of Nirvana. But some expect much more.
Brilliantly compoised, a great read.
Blessings
Elizabeth
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Re: Meditation
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by spud on
Thursday, 1st November 2012 @ 03:32:14 PM AEST
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Hi,
I've never meditated ... as such. I've often stared into blank space ... is that the same?
However, if Nirvana can be glimpsed by taking up a meditation or two then I'm all for trying.
Just in case I don't get there in real time.
Beautifully scripted, as always.
Tommy
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Re: Meditation
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by northernlights on
Friday, 2nd November 2012 @ 04:06:48 AM AEST
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| I can connect with all that is within this poem and your beautiful rhythm and flow takes me away to another world.Being pedantic as I am I think the last two lines need a little bit of tweaking as I lost the rhythm then but overall its great to have another talented poet on the site. |
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