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The Crime of Life
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Monday, 5th November 2012 @ 09:14:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Brutal Endless Thoughts
The Crime of Life
No More
What are These Lost Things Around Me?
They Have Taken a Shape Similar to My Own
But I Can See The Evil in Their Eyes
No disguise
Can Ever Make Them Like Me
A Pitiful
Existence
Everyone Tearing at Each Other From Every Direction
Spreading Their iNFekktion
No Injection
Can Ever Make Them Like Me
The Crime of Life
There is No Way Out
Copyright ©
Onslaught
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2012-11-05 21:14:25]
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Re: The Crime of Life
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by jennyjen on
Monday, 5th November 2012 @ 10:21:43 PM AEST
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| honestly i like this... good job! |
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Re: The Crime of Life
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 6th November 2012 @ 01:40:51 AM AEST
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The way it is written the reader can take it several ways. I enjoyed this. Good work.
Michelle |
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