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ghostly
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 6th November 2012 @ 02:25:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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At times I think I catch a glimpse of her
time plays a trick or two.
Clear as day it seems to be
her visions often teasing me.
A free spirit yes she was
off dancing in the rain.
Or running bare footed across hot sand
in the barren desert plains.
I hear a giggle from long ago
though time, it hasnt been that long.
All the adventures she went on
blink and then she was gone.
Guitar music ringing in desert rims
firelight the only shine
desert night dark as coal
with only the stars looking on.
Oh yes a little ghostly
once in awhile catch a glimpse of her.
Look twice and again she's gone.
I heard her giggle, I really did
I heard her song in the night.
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2012-11-06 02:25:51]
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Re: ghostly
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 6th November 2012 @ 02:53:59 AM AEST
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Shebly-wan,
It's not often that a poem makes we go 'awe' while the hairs on the nape of my neck stand on end (I'm equally superstitious and sentimental).
After finishing work I ate a pie while watching a Spring thunderstorm roll over my local beach. 'How could the evening get any better?', I thought. Well, I just found out...
S.
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Re: ghostly
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by ValDohren on
Tuesday, 6th November 2012 @ 06:36:50 AM AEST
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Very relevant at this time of year - lovely inspired write.
Beautifully penned.
Val |
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Re: ghostly
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th November 2012 @ 02:08:56 PM AEST
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I like the way you think.
I have got so many stories similar to this. Some of my own and some I've heard from friends or relatives. Thank you for sharing another one.
Tim
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Re: ghostly
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by spud on
Friday, 9th November 2012 @ 07:49:10 AM AEST
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Hi Shel,
Perhaps proof that the spirit never dies, only
its receptacle. If you truly believe that you saw
her, who's to say this was not so.
A fine ghostly piece of verse.
Tommy
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Re: ghostly
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 08:53:58 AM AEST
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hmm
Ghostly things
are not always
something to be scared about
well done..... |
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Re: ghostly
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th February 2013 @ 01:18:09 AM AEST
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| This is so beautifully written. This gave me a sense of melancholy and sadness but also a sense of warmth. It's so awesome and moving! |
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Re: ghostly
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 08:31:27 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, peaceful, super imagery! wasn't
scared at all! *turns on light...*
hugs, woofies n' love nessa |
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