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The Rose
Contributed by
littlemo911
on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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One touch will leave a scar
Its the thorn that pains the heart
Its clever and cunning
It swoops down without out notice
It blinds the mind with its fragrance
Tears are what make it grow
Each blend of red fills the soul
It grows from torment and grief
It brings joy with its aroma
Yet, it bring sorrow with its touch
I fear one day it will go away
That one day Ill wake up all alone
With no one to embrace
And with no one to hold
All I fear is an empty space
Each day a petal falls
It loses its colors of fiery passion
That it will one day wither and die
Brings tears down ones eye
What lies beneath this sweet mystery?
This is young love
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littlemo911
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2003-05-11 21:05:00]
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Re: The Rose
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 09:40:25 PM AEST
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| exquisite:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Rose
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:18:12 PM AEST
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Beautifully written...such depth of emotion.
Very well done :o)
Larry
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Re: The Rose
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by night_goddess666 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 11:27:45 AM AEST
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| very emotional. Great poem over all! |
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