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New Direction
Contributed by
unorthodox
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Friday, 9th November 2012 @ 01:13:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Conquered the perception
which once left me blind.
Faced the truth, unburdened my soul.
Reached out to the masses-
But it only left me stranded.
Awakened: traveling - in a new direction.
Lost not the strength - of time endured;
By the lessons of love amassed -
Or the passion by which it's bound.
Heart and soul this road was paved,
But beckoning now - is a new direction.
To be reborn; is not to die -
Or leave it all behind,
For the shadow's past will always be.
The enlightened path, has many forks:
Embraced - by a new direction.
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unorthodox
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Re: New Direction
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by ValDohren on
Friday, 9th November 2012 @ 09:46:41 AM AEST
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Very good, well written.
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Re: New Direction
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by desire on
Saturday, 24th November 2012 @ 10:13:33 PM AEST
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You are an amazing poet and I love every thing you do
People love living the dream
They don't care that its not what it seems
I didn't wake up to fall back asleep
The message of the great deception is much too deep
The fact that I can't reach the masses
Makes my heart weep
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Re: New Direction
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by ming on
Sunday, 14th April 2013 @ 10:05:34 PM AEST
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| Digging this! And this line really spoke to me, 'for the shadow' s past will always be.' ming |
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Re: New Direction
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th May 2013 @ 02:31:48 AM AEST
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Where have I been?
I've really missing out.
A Heavenly write.
awesome.
blessings,
Emy
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Re: New Direction
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by FlintHunter on
Thursday, 23rd January 2014 @ 08:15:05 PM AEST
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| hi i remember you and your great poems. trying to get in touch with you about a website i have for a small group of outstanding poets. please see http://www.verse-virtual.com you can write to me via the contact form there or to ff@verse-virtual.com hope to hear fron you. sincerely, david (real name) |
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Re: New Direction
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 06:28:35 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed, a lovely write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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