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Crimson River
Contributed by
ValDohren
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Sunday, 11th November 2012 @ 05:37:50 AM in AEST
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A crimson river, labyrinthine flows
Down streams traversing sinister terrains
And onwards drifts along the path of life
Through myriad courses, rivulets, and veins
Along a way that takes it to the heart
Then on to where the ring of love remains
A crimson river weaving through your mind
That twists and turns one billion-fold therein
To search out all the feelings that you feel
Plus all the memories that lie within
To raise a train of thought that is sublime
Of dreams, imagination set to spin
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ValDohren
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2012-11-11 05:37:50]
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Re: Crimson River
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by mchall629 on
Sunday, 11th November 2012 @ 01:03:42 PM AEST
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| Very well done. I really enjoyed this one.. |
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Re: Crimson River
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th October 2013 @ 02:50:55 AM AEST
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What a fascinating way of describing thought processes. Very imaginative.
Thank you,
Tim |
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