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Daddys girl
Contributed by
LetYourFeelingsOut
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Thursday, 15th November 2012 @ 03:05:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I saw her eyes filled with tears As she watched them take him away She cried "Dady,please don't leave,I never want to let you go' He moved her arms off his waist Got in the car and said goodbye Her heart was broken
Scared and alone She slowly turned , tears fell down her face She said to herself its all my fault I made him leave daddys never coming back She couldnt take it she ran to her house
Ran staight inside into her room Cryed into her pillow and hugged her teddy bear The bear that he won her when she was 4 They were at the carnival she was on her daddys shoulders Happy as can be hoping this moment will always stay
Now at 11 she still doesnt understand how this even happened Why did he leave her alone? Did he not love her? Did she do something wrong? Was it because she colored the walls when she was little?
The childservices are coming to take her away Put her in a home where it wont feel the same Where shell miss her daddy every single breathe she breaths Why are there still parents like this in this world? Why does this have to happen to a poor little child ? What did she do wrong ?
STOP CHILD ABANDONMENT !!!!
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Re: Daddys girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 15th November 2012 @ 10:10:54 PM AEST (User
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Very touching, powerful write.
It's very sad but awesome in it's own right.
Huggs, blessings,
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Re: Daddys girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Saturday, 17th November 2012 @ 06:46:47 AM AEST (User
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beautiful poem |
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Re: Daddys girl
(User Rating: 1 ) by NightMareShoGun on
Wednesday, 28th November 2012 @ 12:07:27 PM AEST (User
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this poem made me cry i loved everything about it outstanding work :) nicely done |
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