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Contributed by
lonelywolf04
on
Saturday, 24th November 2012 @ 03:21:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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I'm not real I'm just a lie,
I'm not real cause I can never die,
You think in me you believe,
But your eyes they just deceive,
I do not exist for me you can't see,
I do not exist yet you look up to me,
I am who you wish you were,
But your just the beast without fur,
I will not exist so don't look up to me,
I will not exist for me you can't see,
Because of this emotional storm,
Into me you may never form,
I will never be real and I will never die,
I will never be real for I am just a lie,
Your reflection shows you what to do,
Cause your not me your just you.
Copyright ©
lonelywolf04
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2012-11-24 03:21:00]
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Re: You
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by Waynster on
Thursday, 26th February 2015 @ 06:55:31 AM AEST
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This my friend is an awesome poem. To make it easier to read though, maybe you should try putting a space in between each rhyming lines.
Food for thought
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