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Computer Boy: Aria of the Machine Part II
Contributed by
plasticherry
on
Monday, 26th November 2012 @ 12:02:15 AM in AEST
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There once was a dusty computer that sat on a rusty table in an abandoned factory
With severed wires and a broken heartdrive the computer longed for human feelings
One day computer's prayer was answered
A pair of arms were extended from the heaven above that were pushed through the holographic screen
And a heart program was installed
Overwhelmed by a sudden surge of emotions the computer crashed
Once it restarted an arm grew out of the computer screen
A head came out soon after
Unable to speak, computer professed its love through a series of codes and text
Laying its head on the keyboard computer boy closed his eyes
With one arm he reached for the wire, unplugging it.
And once again, the power was off...
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plasticherry
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2012-11-26 00:02:15]
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Re: Computer Boy: Aria of the Machine Part II
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th November 2012 @ 12:35:48 AM AEST
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I love your imagination. Love the way something that really could have no emotion is brought to life with it with your vivid imagination. So sad and lonely.
I have sometimes thought of an alternative with the human mind. A switich to trun off the emotions. Sometimes actually the computer has it oh so good.
I'll bet there's also some hidden meaning with this one. Perhaps some symbolism. Self biography maybe?
Anyways, thank you for an enjoyable read.
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