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Airplane Seat
Contributed by
mchall629
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Thursday, 29th November 2012 @ 05:55:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Staring out the airplane window,
Into a sky a thousand shades of red.
If it could have told me a story,
I wander what it would've said.
Maybe it would have told me,
I must fly into the darkest of nights.
Before I am ever able to reach,
The tunnels beginning light.
Could it have the message,
Continue to fly and be free.
Because here high above the clouds,
The whole world is mine to see.
I've seen the rivers and mountains,
Witnessed a volcano begin to blow.
Watched thousands of sunrises,
Off the wingtip seen their glow.
It's such a sight to see here,
Flying here in the midst of the stars.
No matter how beautiful it is,
I can't get her out of my heart.
I wish this big old sky,
Could grant me just one wish.
I'd trade in my front row seat,
To be with the one I so badly miss.
So Mr. Man in the Moon,
Please tell me a story tonight.
Help put my mind at ease,
On another long and lonely flight.
Can you tell me a fairy-tale,
One I can cling to forever.
Give me a reason to smile,
A story of her and I together.
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mchall629
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2012-11-29 17:55:23]
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Re: Airplane Seat
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by Ellewood on
Thursday, 29th November 2012 @ 05:59:51 PM AEST
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| beautifully written...thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Airplane Seat
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th November 2012 @ 10:31:40 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this. I like to fly and you took me on that trip of flight.
May wish to check your spelling or word usage. Wander instead of wonder?
Nicely done.
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Airplane Seat
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by Shattered_soul on
Saturday, 1st December 2012 @ 10:08:16 AM AEST
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sweetly written.
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