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Guilt
Contributed by
Facade
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Monday, 3rd December 2012 @ 12:55:15 AM in AEST
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Lost in anonymity created by the lies of this game
It's critical to be cynical but the outlook's the same
Applied leverage is pivotal, we levy our blame
Guilt builds in our hearts, the herald of our shame
Crippling dark motives, lethargic and lame
Not to say we are remedied, our evils aren't tame
For iniquity becomes us, and we're burned by its flame
It's shadow consumes us, and sullies our name
We were never purposed pure, our meaning was to maim
To lay beside our destruction, and rue what we became
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Facade
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2012-12-03 00:55:15]
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Re: Guilt
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by Stalkee on
Tuesday, 4th December 2012 @ 12:33:10 AM AEST
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You have quite a way with words and weaved a wonderful, thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Guilt
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by northernlights on
Friday, 7th December 2012 @ 05:56:18 AM AEST
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| We were never purposed pure............ something that I think is very difficult for many to face and explore but this you have done eloquently.I have found my freedom or at least my get out clause from the lips of my child who when I feel like I am being consumed by processes beyond my control she introduces the simple concept of I don't care and it doesn't matter because she knows I care too much. |
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Re: Guilt
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by NightMareShoGun on
Monday, 17th June 2013 @ 03:08:52 PM AEST
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| nicely done |
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