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Lately
Contributed by
stalkee
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Tuesday, 4th December 2012 @ 12:30:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The riddles speak so clearly now
The knotted truth comes untied
Who am I to mention how
when I couldn't fix it if I tried?
My heart is breaking when I see
a laughing girl, smiling with me
I can see beneath and tell
It's just a shroud to hide her hell
Inside her eyes, the coldest tale
A flash of light, one love wasted
Who I am to forge the trail
when I can't be the one to replace it?
The tears are blooming deep within
She holds them back and then pretends
So I play my part by the scripts
Acting like I don't see her trembling lips
God, she lost something that once was true
She takes her clothes off and she's at my side
But who am I to hold on to
when I couldn't fix it if I tried?
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stalkee
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2012-12-04 00:30:09]
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Re: Lately
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by MrsJackson on
Tuesday, 4th December 2012 @ 08:35:12 AM AEST
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| Very Nice and well spoken! |
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Re: Lately
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by mchall629 on
Wednesday, 5th December 2012 @ 01:16:12 AM AEST
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| Loved it.. Very well done.. Thnaks.. |
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Re: Lately
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th December 2012 @ 07:41:25 PM AEST
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Very creative Writing.
Awesome.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lately
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by desciple on
Thursday, 6th December 2012 @ 06:50:49 PM AEST
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| great write, very powerful piece, I loved the way everything flowed so naturally. Keep writing |
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