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Venus danced
Contributed by
sasha
on
Tuesday, 4th December 2012 @ 05:12:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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He wrote her a song, his strength gentle and hesitant
In the night sky, their future caught in the moon
Dream catcher patterns, they spiraled together
Painting sunsets, danced creation in innocence
Moonbeams stood guard, tangles of silver
The dew glistening on her heaving shoulders
Vulcan whispered his ancient secrets
Easing her into the dance, lulling her fears
Venus danced, her dark eyes sated
As they swirled through lifetimes of waiting
He had been walking to her from all his pasts
Reaching her side through impossible walls
Warriors of life, they churn loves hollows
They slake their thirst as riddles weave stories
They fly with each other defending dreamscapes
They dance together on mysteries deep and high
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sasha
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2012-12-04 05:12:30]
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Re: Venus danced
(User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 26th May 2013 @ 05:30:55 PM AEST
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"Dream catcher patterns, they spiraled together
Painting sunsets, danced creation in innocence "
Excellent line
I like the way you flow..... |
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