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the pine forest
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 09:29:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The Pine Forest.
Muddy brown the inert pool
in a man planted pine forest,
no fish, or water lilies, only
the stench of decaying water.
A fledgling flew, on fluffy
wings, across its surface
didnt make it and the pool
claimed another victim.
Stillness inhaled easily, in
the thicket a sprig snapped,
no one took notice; the sky
between trees was azure.
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
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2002-08-04 21:29:16]
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Re: the pine forest
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 07:52:42 AM AEST
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Very good poem , I could almost smell the decay.
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