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LIVING INSIDE OUT
Contributed by
mrsjackson
on
Monday, 10th December 2012 @ 03:11:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This life I live
Its not a dream
Its a wakeup call
To reality
So much to learn
So much to see
Too much sometimes
We inner bleed
My soul weeps
Cries deep
Emptiness inside
Not complete
Im weak
Cant see
But two feet
In front of me
So lead
Take me with Thee
Let me breathe
In Eternity
Let me
Be Free
Copyright ©
mrsjackson
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2012-12-10 15:11:13]
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Re: LIVING INSIDE OUT
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th December 2012 @ 05:14:22 PM AEST
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You did a great job of bleeding this out. I can totally relate.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: LIVING INSIDE OUT
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by NightMareShoGun on
Tuesday, 11th December 2012 @ 12:07:54 PM AEST
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| good job |
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Re: LIVING INSIDE OUT
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by Kailas on
Tuesday, 11th December 2012 @ 06:05:06 PM AEST
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| Great job I love the rhyming! Thanks for sharing :P |
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