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the Parting
Contributed by
joydeep_nath
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Saturday, 15th December 2012 @ 01:07:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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..here we part ways;
sadness and me,
in the dead of night
with Bach in the air.
take, take all you can
for all I have is what I serve
claim my heart, rip it out.
grant me a favor
and see me no more
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2012-12-15 13:07:56]
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Re: the Parting
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th December 2012 @ 09:18:28 PM AEST
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swift and swift, could be parting of cheeks, Imagine that, you're poem recited in such a way... I mean that, longitudinally, it becomes so mind boggling brilliant then. A private measure of braveness or acceptance of reality, or just moving on, since there's so much more.
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