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Dreaming of Her
Contributed by
scottstone
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Tuesday, 18th December 2012 @ 04:07:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Please take my hand and run away
Into this dream before the lights erase me
Im quickly fading
And well travel to a land unseen
Youre too beautiful in a world thats always breaking
So please dont wake me
I want to stay right here
As I whisper through your ear
I need you
Youre the beauty of a mountains creek
The love that I have failed to speak
That I might ever get the chance to reach you
And if I could live a thousand lives
Id pray to God with all my heart one single wish
That hed never stop my dreams of you tonight
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scottstone
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2012-12-18 04:07:36]
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Re: Dreaming of Her
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 01:10:55 AM AEST
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I can definitely relate to this - pining for someone in your dreams. Great images and great overall writing. Keep it up.
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Re: Dreaming of Her
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 05:00:10 AM AEST
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lovely, nicely written as well.
Michelle |
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Re: Dreaming of Her
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 08:40:03 AM AEST
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ahhh to dream
of love
is so wonderful..... |
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