|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Half of Me
Contributed by
Whiskurz
on
Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 05:59:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
My passion sits beneath a stone
A place where I can't go
For death has come to half of me
With one half dying slow
How cruel is death to take my heart?
But yet it lets me breathe
It came between the two of us
And it will not let me leave
Half of me has forsaken life
It lays out in a field
The other half will not let go
It simply will not yield
I pray for death to come my way
Each day on her behalf
But death can't see how much I miss
My beloved second half?
My passion sits beneath a stone
Where one day I will be
I can't be whole until I'm back
With the other half of me
Copyright ©
Whiskurz
... [
2012-12-19 05:59:37]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Half of Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 10:49:54 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A very interesting way of expressing loss and broken heart. Very nicely written. I like it.
 to YPDC.
Tim
|
|
|
Re: Half of Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on
Thursday, 20th December 2012 @ 02:20:31 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Great rhythm and great writing all around. Such a sad piece, but very well spoken. I enjoyed reading this.
-Everette |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
