|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
I NEED you
Contributed by
Kelseigh
on
Friday, 21st December 2012 @ 03:08:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
Why wont you talk to me? You can say anything at all.
You can make fun of me; you can push me in the hall
I need to know you are aware that Im here
Im speaking to you and Im shivering in fear
I dont always ask for people to even acknowledge me
But youre my prized possession. Others can leave me be
I miss your voice and the way you made me feel
You may not know thisbut thats a big deal
I havent felt this wayever. Whatever it is, I want it bad
You left me and I just crave that feeling, youre driving me mad!
Im clueless as to what you are doing to make me feel this way
But what I know for sure is that I want it to stay
Obviously when you leave all the feelings disappear
All the happiness and confidence, then I just fill up with fear
I need you here with me; I need you by my side
When you make up your mindtell me what you decide
Copyright ©
Kelseigh
... [
2012-12-21 03:08:39]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: I NEED you
(User Rating: 1 )
by Whiskurz on
Friday, 21st December 2012 @ 03:22:08 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Your cadence and rhyme are that of a seasoned poet......A Well written piece indeed.....Whisk |
|
|
Re: I NEED you
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on
Saturday, 22nd December 2012 @ 01:47:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I started writing at 14, myself, and you write much better than I did at that age. You've got talent, let it keep pouring thru.
-Everette |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
