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A Lover's Gaze
Contributed by
RealmX
on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As I look into your eyes My whole world comes alive Set upon such a fair face That can only shine with grace Your lips are so cute when you pout Makes me forget what I'm thinking about Dislike of your nose is what you think As I refute it with a subtle wink You are most beautiful in my eyes I see you and my heart doth flies Softening my heart in many ways Enjoying your presence through all these days How can I stay irritated at you When smiling and chuckling is what I do Where have you been hiding away I liked you despite what they had to say You;re a light to the darkness of this world Encouraging my feelings out like a flag unfurled I'm glad I met you under that cold Autumnal sky Now I consider myself a very lucky guy
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Re: A Lover's Gaze
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ash on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 05:01:34 PM AEST (User
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Too cute. Hope you read it to whoever you wrote it for. |
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Re: A Lover's Gaze
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 08:20:22 PM AEST (User
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nice good write
Shari |
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Re: A Lover's Gaze
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 10:19:44 PM AEST (User
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Great poem ... well written ... Jan |
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