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An idea
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Lenny
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Friday, 28th December 2012 @ 12:53:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It starts with a question,
And ends with an idea,
the mind wonders and ponders,
through in and throughout,
the giving and the receiving,
the lying and the deceiving,
It ends with an idea,
And starts with a question.
Copyright ©
Lenny
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2012-12-28 12:53:24]
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Re: An idea
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th December 2012 @ 01:04:08 PM AEST
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| Great ideas love your wording |
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Re: An idea
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th December 2012 @ 03:58:20 PM AEST
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You should though make them a bit longer
Your thinking concept was great but can you expand on where the thinking will take you |
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