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Today I Saw A Diamond Cry
Contributed by
Whiskurz
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Friday, 28th December 2012 @ 05:32:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Today I saw a diamond cry
For your beauty stole its shine
The flowers all began to sigh
For you make them all benign
The stars no longer reflect the moon
For you have become their light
Even the sun is not immune
For he chases away the night
Your shadow makes the sun rejoice
He follows where ever you go
His love for you has bound his voice
Or he would have told you so
Even the breeze whispers your name
Just to touch your hair
Your shadow tries to share your fame
She follows you everywhere
Today I saw a diamond cry
For your beauty stole its shine
Not a day goes by that I don't ask why
The Good Lord made you mine
Copyright ©
Whiskurz
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2012-12-28 17:32:22]
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Re: Today I Saw A Diamond Cry
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th December 2012 @ 05:37:31 PM AEST
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Very emotional
Great use of abiotic elements
The form was spellbinding and anyone would love this poem
for your writing has struck my heart and made a home |
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Re: Today I Saw A Diamond Cry
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by jmd on
Friday, 28th December 2012 @ 09:07:52 PM AEST
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| Just one word: Brava |
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Re: Today I Saw A Diamond Cry
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by emystar on
Saturday, 29th December 2012 @ 04:34:14 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Beautifull write. Sounds likie you are blessed.
smiles,
emy |
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