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Rain
Contributed by
Ash
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Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Food has no taste, sleep brings no rest
I gotta know, if this is some sorta test
The dark gives relief, the light only pain
I'm crying inside and it does nothin' but rain
I lie here all alone in my empty bed
so cold and wondering what i did or said
Mama, don't you love me anymore?
Mama, I'm bleeding on the floor.
I'm so sorry Mama, you're ashamed of me
I'm sorry I'm not what you want me to be
But I'm here, you can save me, if you only try.
I'm sorry, give me one last chance before I die.
Copyright ©
Ash
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2003-05-12 23:35:00]
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Re: Rain
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 04:57:09 AM AEST
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this is a very good write...i am sorry for your pain...hang in there you have much talent
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Re: Rain
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by M on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 05:39:40 AM AEST
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This is so sad. i wrote a poem quite like it a few weeks ago. I think I know what you're going through, so feel free to talk if you want.
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