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Beautiful
Contributed by
DanaZombieSlayer
on
Sunday, 13th January 2013 @ 12:24:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Beneath the stars, a lonesome girl,
Who's hair was white as snow.
For many years, she cried and wept,
The reason left unknown.
The village people just passed her by,
Not a comforting word to say.
All they gave to her were glances,
Sympathy towards her silent pain.
Then one day, appeared a boy,
Who noticed the girl's despair.
Curious to why she wept and cried,
This girl with the snow white hair.
He asked the girl:"Why do you cry,
When there's so many beautiful things?"
With a pitiful smile, she lifted her head.
"If I could only see."
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DanaZombieSlayer
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2013-01-13 00:24:24]
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Re: Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th January 2013 @ 12:32:23 AM AEST
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Leave the audience wanting more. The sign of s true artist. Makes the reader wants to know what's going to happen next.
Nicely done.
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Thank you for an enjoyable read,
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