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Reckless Angels
Contributed by
Sasha
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Sunday, 13th January 2013 @ 09:55:24 AM in AEST
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They fly over lives, goddesses of change
Casting shadows in time, turning sanctuaries
Decaying claims crumble old and bored
To lilting choices raised from silent calls for help
They shrug off barren minds, limping handicapped
Smiling their victory at rage and helplessness
A broken heart sometimes, a call answered nevertheless
To bring lives together that went astray on familiarity
These angels though wing on, dancing tireless to the mystery
No spite or ignorance bruise their morphing realities
Guardians of keep, they tender forgotten hopes
An adulterous spoke to a wheel that needs the strength
Warping on, their work always seen in distortion
They pulse in networks of veiled wants and lustre
Their purity known and felt by souls they have touched
Lie harpooned by the rest of a world that has lost
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Re: Reckless Angels
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by enigma on
Wednesday, 16th January 2013 @ 08:16:43 PM AEST
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Sasha...
Wow! I can't digest the whole of it in one sitting...in my one reading there were so many signature phrasings that demanded a more thorough examination. Briefly, you have a talent with the cerebral use of language. Your mind, heart, soul and spirit have no respect for common colloquialisms: That's good! Damn! That's really good!
I promise you I will spend time with the verbal expressions of this holistic you, and get back with you...in the mean time, keep it up!
Blessings,
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Re: Reckless Angels
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by enigma on
Wednesday, 16th January 2013 @ 09:13:01 PM AEST
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Back again, Sasha...
Absolutely nothing needs be added to your heart, soul, mind and spirit. All that you are has tapped into humanity's need. I am embarrassed to suggest certain punctuation enhancements. Having matured through English-tic proclivities, punctuation just naturally seems to present itself. Commas, colons, periods and semi-colons being the nuanced nuisance they are, this is how I would punctuate your words. With the profound expressions your words embody, I would simply forego the use of capitalization. Your words have no beginning and no end, so to hell with capitalization and the last period.
I could write a book addressing your poignant phrases. Forget the emotions they arouse in me. When read thoughtfully, phrase by phrase, an entire universe of inter-related Homo sapiens' reality is tapped into. Mine is no more significant than any others. I simply thank "Nature" that you were caused to put these universal realities into words.
they fly over lives:
goddesses of change,
casting shadows in time;
turning sanctuaries,
decaying claims,
crumble,
old and bored,
to lilting choices,
raised from silent calls for help...
they shrug off barren minds,
limping handicapped;
smiling their victory
at rage and helplessness;
a broken heart;
sometimes a call answered,
nevertheless,
to bring lives together
that went astray
on familiarity...
these angels
though winged on;
dancing tireless to the mystery;
no spite;
no ignorance bruising their morphing realities...
guardians of keep,
they tender forgotten hopes;
an adulterous spoke
to a wheel
that craves strength...
warping on;
their work always seen in distortion;
they pulse in networks of veiled wants and luster;
their purity known and felt
by souls they have touched,
lie harpooned
by a world
that has lost
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Re: Reckless Angels
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by shelby on
Friday, 25th January 2013 @ 01:33:13 AM AEST
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I want to pick a favorite part but cannot this just dives right inside those of us reading.A delight, you are so very talented, my pleasure reading your perfection!
Michelle |
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Re: Reckless Angels
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by Lee on
Sunday, 24th March 2013 @ 06:35:16 AM AEST
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This poem is absolutely beautiful. I feel like it speaks to me though I cannot fully comprehend the mysteries it reveals. I appreciate your writing very much!
-L. |
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