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Have You Ever?
Contributed by
TheDreamer
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Sunday, 13th January 2013 @ 09:58:59 PM in AEST
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Have you ever felt like you had a story that needed to be told but had nothing to say?
Have you ever thought Maybe I have no talent?
Have you ever felt like youre only talent is the ability to function without one?
Have you ever practiced a victory speech for an achievement you have yet to attain?
Have you ever dreamed that it might one day be you?
Have you ever been too scared to try because youre too scared to fail?
Is the thought of your dream coming true as frightening as it is exciting?
Do you sometimes not even know who you want to be, only that you one day want be somebody at all?
Is your dream simply to one day to know what to dream about?
Yeah, me too.
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by enigma on
Wednesday, 16th January 2013 @ 07:46:17 PM AEST
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Dear "Dreamer,"
I'm sixty-one years old! I know! That's no fair! I've already read the end of the story! But, when I was in my teens and twenties, I, too, wondered! If sixty-one years experience in this significance distorting world means anything; forget about dreams, belief, faith, hope and trust. Act on what you KNOW. And, when you can't KNOW it, just keep pummeling reality with questions. A little hint: The present social mindset has no answers...
By the way, your presentation showed a skill with placing just the right amount of thought with just the right amount of words. And your ending was pleasantly digested. Good thoughts and skillful presentation. Keep asking and writing...
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Re: Have You Ever?
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 06:22:48 PM AEST
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1: 'raises her hand as fellow dreamer' 2: no 3: no 4: no 5: no 6: perhaps
7: no 8: no 9: i am who i am; i am somebody 10: i have a few recycled
dreams now 11: do i remember one of your poems without having
questions? no not at the moment 12: will your next poem be?
hugs n' love nessa
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