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Dominoe
Contributed by
jdioo
on
Monday, 14th January 2013 @ 06:44:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Your Courage Fell Like Pedals
You Moved To Ketchem
But Ash,
Remained Turned To
Fossil Fuel...
But Blossom
You Did
Starving For Hardness
Your Fists ..
Clench
As It Travels
Uncharted
Waters Bombarding Family Borders...
Your Wish Reeks
A Stench Of Success
But...
A Scent Of Regret
Ignored,
For Pursuit Of Respect
As You Digest Your Neglect
Quickly
Taste Buds Change Retrospect
When You Climax Your Climb
Crave A
Hungry Repeat For Time,
Mind Running Laps
Towards The
Pride Thats On Clash
With The
Fear You Once Had,
Taste
Regret
Because Every Weakness You Consumed
Just
Starved You Instead
Because Your
Hungry For More
Hungry For War
Your
Pinned To The Board
And
Fear Was The Dart
Which
Shook Up Your Cords
Your
Pride Played The Harp
That
Hardened Your Core
Rage Was Restored,
Fuel Was Delivered
You
Locked Up The Door...
Fire Paved A Diamond
Trap
For A Repetitive
Strike Out
Batting Lineup Of Your Loved Ones...
Grand Slam
Dominoe.
Copyright ©
jdioo
... [
2013-01-14 18:44:07]
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Re: Dominoe
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by dvtpdw on
Tuesday, 15th January 2013 @ 01:49:21 PM AEST
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| I liked how you took a human condition and spread it out for all to see. This is a very nice write, with a concept that was made clear. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: Dominoe
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by InfinitePoet on
Sunday, 20th January 2013 @ 12:11:32 AM AEST
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absolutley fantastic!! Keep writing and sharing for eternity!!
Peace,
Dana |
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