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When Shadows Dance
Contributed by
Whiskurz
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Sunday, 20th January 2013 @ 11:22:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I followed my shadow to see where he went
To see all the things he would see
I've often wondered how his day was spent
When he wasn't following me
We walked to a place in a crowded park
There were people everywhere
I sat down beside him on a empty bench
In the middle of a busy square
We waited for probably an hour or two
Then after a little while
Something by the fountain caught his eye
And that's when he started to smile
Another shadow came walking our way
A girl, as pretty as could be
I just couldn't help but notice her beauty
But she didn't notice me
That's when my shadow stretched forth his hand
And the two began to dance
I watched from my bench as the shadows kissed
'Til the air was filled with romance
They danced all day 'til the sun went down
And then went their separate ways
So needless to say, I follow my shadow
A little bit more these days
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Re: When Shadows Dance
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th January 2013 @ 12:13:45 PM AEST
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I'd be following my shadow too if it did that.
"Hey, Shadow! Where is that shadow's human?"
Like this a lot. Thank you.
Tim
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Re: When Shadows Dance
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by flavellm on
Sunday, 20th January 2013 @ 02:10:29 PM AEST
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Re: When Shadows Dance
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by shelby on
Friday, 25th January 2013 @ 01:27:57 AM AEST
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You rock! This is well written, great images and such a feeling, fun and smiles I love this. Nice thought
Michelle |
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