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BANG
Contributed by
TheSoulEater08
on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2013 @ 02:02:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'll go out with a bang
Not one thing on the brain
Blood all over the floor
You run out the back door
I told you i couldn't take it any more
But you didnt listen to one word
But i know you heard, heard every word
~Angel~
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Re: BANG
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2013 @ 02:28:50 AM AEST
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Powerful. Direct and emotional. I liked the insight that people can hear and still not listen. I also enjoyed the split rhyme in the last line too.
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