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Insect Flakes
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Sunday, 27th January 2013 @ 06:40:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Insect flakes fall
Wave throughout the air in play
Scatter and return
Silent winter gnats
Moving to and fro with grace
Quite delicately
Streetlights act as stages
Quiet fluorescent curtain calls
Elegant routines
Precipitation
Show of nature, unalive
Yet alive in mind
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2013-01-27 06:40:26]
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Re: Insect Flakes
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 29th January 2013 @ 02:38:44 PM AEST
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Nice write.... Unique and interesting idea as an metaphor for snow, I tend to think of them as white butterflies :)
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