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in from the rain
Contributed by
daen14
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Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Why don't you open the cover and read the book
Let your mind flow past that first physical look
My soul is old and my mind is a mirror
Look into me allow your soul nearer
Dirty your hands with my thoughts
Close your eyes so you can better see
that some love has costs
But mine is free
Wrap your reasonings around my perceptions
put your fears into my hands
You no longer have to fear their deceptions
No longer a boy
You are a man
Show me who you are, who you were and who you want to be
Show me where you travel when you don,t leave the room
Show me the place where your heart is free
Introduce me to the you that is secret and protected
Don't hide your ugliness your passion or your pain
Show me the silent you that has long been neglected
And I will pull you in from the rain
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daen14
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2003-05-13 09:35:00]
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Re: in from the rain
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 10:05:08 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem. Great job here!!
Michelle |
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Re: in from the rain
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 10:34:35 AM AEST
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breathtaking
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Re: in from the rain
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 01:52:31 PM AEST
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"Show me the place where your heart is free" - love that line!! Great job! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: in from the rain
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 05:11:38 PM AEST
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| i really like this...you use just the right words and create really effective phrases like 'dirty your hands with my thoughts' and 'my soul is old and my mind is a mirror'. excellent poem, welcome to ypdc, check out my work if you like, Kate x |
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Re: in from the rain
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by Bizzy on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 11:16:56 PM AEST
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| Dear daen14, Welcome!!! I REALLY liked this poem! It impressed me very much. I'm eager to read more of your poetry. Friend, Bizzy |
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