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Plans
Contributed by
Smurf
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Wednesday, 13th February 2013 @ 07:34:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I am charming you,
and oh the things you do not see through.
Broken in chunks, missing a piece,
unwilling to put them back, keep your release.
Start your own fire, thow the first flame,
never look back for it is in vain.
The first to cheat, the first to steal,
Leave first not last, not victim to how you feel.
Love is war, love is fickle, love is fluid,
Pooling, freezing and ruined.
The land is stripped,
Someone throws the first seed, and it grows.
Copyright ©
Smurf
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2013-02-13 19:34:56]
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Re: Plans
(User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on
Friday, 15th February 2013 @ 12:10:14 PM AEST
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| Very intense. You take the reader on a journey of pain, hope and promise of meaningful end. I like this, and it flows so nicely. Great write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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