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I lay here
Contributed by
funmi
on
Monday, 18th February 2013 @ 06:08:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The best feeling
Is being loved.
All our tender moments,
Just in each others company
The night is young,
The love is awaken.
Let it never end
Almost a year,
And you look me in the eye
And say it never happened.
The constant flashblacks
Have me questioning,
Did you ever really love me?
You always reminded me to never leave you,
You said you would never be the same without me
You said you would be broken if i left.
The shoe is now on the other foot.
Why do i let you have power over my emotions?
Pulled down from cloud nine
Deja vu, all the same motion
Filled with hate in my confused state
I rant my anger to your closed ears
My soft heart now turned to stone
I am faced with my loneliest fears
The truth pierces the heart
Like a sword
I now lay here, broken
Hoping you will realise,
what you did to me.
All the lies, the contradictions.
Now you say you love her,
And want her back regardless
I saw the flowers you sent her,
Why wait so long to be honest,
After i gave up my most precious,
Is she better than me?
Answer me
I lay here, embarassed.
How could i expose myself
And trust you to shield me.
Why did i believe you,
when you said you
would never leave me?.
Copyright ©
funmi
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2013-02-18 06:08:49]
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Re: I lay here
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by funmi on
Monday, 18th February 2013 @ 01:12:44 PM AEST
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| i would love some feedback :) |
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Re: I lay here
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by kihr on
Monday, 18th February 2013 @ 03:13:01 PM AEST
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| Sounds like a case of high school love gone ary :( I can understand this because sometimes you don't know who you love. From a guys perspective you can't always see the forest through the trees. I have loved and then i have been in love. Sometimes you d'nt know which until its past and you hurt others in the process. I am sorry for yours. |
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