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Beautiful Love
Contributed by
JulietNwaora
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Tuesday, 19th February 2013 @ 04:32:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love me in a way that is beautiful and then we can be beastly
I physically have the looks of the wise but
Emotionally have the mind of a child
That beautiful love of the old fashioned, call me stupid, yes i admire that love
The world has taken a different shape, and that beautiful love a different form
Life has more depth to it yet we are stuck in its shallow waters
I despise that beautiful lust, that beautiful deceit, that beautiful pain
We are young at heart but still, the mistakes are there to stay
There to scar that beautiful life, that beautiful destiny
Pressured to soil that seal, to kill that beauty, to destroy that Golden Rose
Never will it be worth it in the end, worth your beautiful love
But filth from hell is what you become
I want you to look at me without your eyes and see through my protective shell
I want you to cure my secrets and conquer my pain
I choose to be young, to be beautiful, to be loved
I choose to keep what is precious and sacred that way
I choose to keep my virtue, my honor, my life
So take my life and patiently hold it dear to you
For if you are my beautiful love then
Make sweet love to me
That I may taste your every move and
Hear your very soul because
I will always choose to wait for my beautiful love
Copyright ©
JulietNwaora
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2013-02-19 16:32:04]
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Re: Beautiful Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th February 2013 @ 02:47:39 AM AEST
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Wow, this is great! So many levels between sincere beautiful love and hot lust, but not without the true love!!! Love it. May wish to fix that typo though. Here is the link for the poem / edit delete forum. http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Forums&file=viewtopic&t=5486 if you want to.
Thank you very much for posting and  to YPDC.
Tim
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Re: Beautiful Love
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by richard2 on
Saturday, 23rd February 2013 @ 07:47:46 PM AEST
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I believe that physical love is only the manifestation of something
far more basic
the desire of two minds to become one
in thought as well as reality
You express the idea of what really matters
in any relationship very well.
Richard
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Re: Beautiful Love
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by desciple on
Wednesday, 27th February 2013 @ 01:40:39 PM AEST
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| Love is amazing, but to be true to yourself and not sell your love out, so that you can be true to your heart...that is real love. I loved the message this is a great piece of writing. Keep writing, I hope to see more and read more of your writings. |
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