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THE DARK SUN

Contributed by Lemon on Thursday, 21st February 2013 @ 11:08:39 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Those dark clouds in the sky
Those tough rains in your sight
All showed you should give up
And rethink all that things
That within steers up you

I maintained the focus,
Even the opportunities were out
So far away from your intentions
Of becoming your dreams comes true
And for you get your redemption.

But, finally, the sky opens,
The sun brightly comes
All your efforts were not in vain
You reaped what you sewed
Now you got all the gold plants.

Now you are free,
You can trip anywhere
You can do what you wished
With of lot of money in your pocked
And many cards are in your sleeves.

Now the dark sun is far away
And you do neither remind it
But if this sun lights now you
It eclipsed other skies, others ways
Its a dark sun that doesnt get fruits

Doesnt get fruits to them,
To those works with you
As a loyal comrades, friends
Who thinks to be true what you say:
You, who, are the dark sun around them.

Copyright © Lemon ... [ 2013-02-21 23:08:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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