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Taken Away
Contributed by
spike
on
Saturday, 23rd February 2013 @ 07:03:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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spreadeagled on my back,
the diamond stars
dust the black:
just when I think theyll show the way,
the sun brings on the day.
stealing kisses and sipping wine
why cant it always be so fine:
just when I think youre here to stay,
chance takes it all away.
the winds keep screaming
and the rain falls hard,
the heat and drought
show no regard:
just when I think I can make it pay,
the weather strips it all away.
dustbowl depression
and high water blues,
I dont want to walk
in these shoes:
just when I think Ive won the day,
the night comes and takes it away
it all gets taken away.
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spike
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2013-02-23 19:03:06]
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Re: Taken Away
(User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on
Monday, 25th February 2013 @ 12:08:06 PM AEST
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| The true lament of the reality of life. Yet within the pain of destruction comes the tiny ray of possibilities. I liked the imagery and the path your words took the reader on. Very nice write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: Taken Away
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by spud on
Thursday, 28th February 2013 @ 07:44:03 AM AEST
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Hi Spike,
Temporary beings living temporary lives.
Why is nothing forever - except the promised
eternity that, apparently, you could die for?
Nice piece, as always.
T
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