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Prism
Contributed by
jdioo
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Sunday, 24th February 2013 @ 02:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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when we see eye to eye your colorblind to a stained glass
my true colors never meet the dye you resist the urge to turn
you compared me to monochromatic rubix cubes and thought me to be solved
pointless game.
but am i solved
or evolved?
my complexion is better left plain
you see hue?
you see nothing
you'll never play me
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jdioo
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2013-02-24 14:55:58]
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Re: Prism
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by Tarheel_Treat on
Sunday, 24th February 2013 @ 05:47:54 PM AEST
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| wow! That was very interesting. I like the continuous play on the idea of color. I especially: "you compared me to monochromatic rubix cubes and thought me to be solved/pointless game." I really feel the intensity of that. I loved this. I would love to read/hear the rest of the poem! Thanks for the read. |
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