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I dreamed
Contributed by
shelby
on
Tuesday, 26th February 2013 @ 01:36:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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I dreamed of a sunny sky, a lemon drop against the blue.
Fields of swaying sunflowers, meadows dripping with dew.
I dreamed of happy times, and smiling faces all around.
Laughter and music, the only sound, whispers on the wind.
I dreamed of all of us together, joined in warm embraces
and nothing but love and warmth dancing bright on our faces.
I heard lots of I love you's, and felt warmth deep within my heart.
A perfect moment etched in time, a truth left within my heart.
I dreamed of everything, a perfect, serene place.
Where we were all a family, beating life at its race.
We stood together tall and strong, to not one would come any harm,
for we lived together in harmony and love,joy our only song.
I woke up from that dream, laying in the dark
almost shivered at the thought of it,
how could something seem so real??
That was really not??
I dreamed a little dream, my self made fantasy
a tear slid down my cheeks,
as the city noise and rain drifted in the window.
It wasn't real, only made up in my sleep
but what a nice dream I dreamed
even in waking hours its not for keeps.
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shelby
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2013-02-26 01:36:46]
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Re: I dreamed
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by colinb on
Tuesday, 26th February 2013 @ 02:06:20 AM AEST
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| So beautifull & sad Michelle |
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Re: I dreamed
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by thezenmonkey on
Tuesday, 26th February 2013 @ 03:12:37 PM AEST
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| nice poem |
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Re: I dreamed
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th February 2013 @ 05:43:16 PM AEST
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Dreams truly do suck at times because we have to wake up from them. This sorta reminded me of a Twilight Zone I saw once where the woman escaped into a virtual fantasy world because she was happy there.
Really liked it, Michelle.
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Re: I dreamed
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 18th March 2013 @ 04:09:18 AM AEST
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| ahhh yes, the beautiful escape that is our dreams. Sometimes a moment, sometimes it seems an eternity. If only we could freeze time, or escape into a dream at will. :) |
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Re: I dreamed
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by Archie on
Saturday, 18th May 2013 @ 05:15:20 PM AEST
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i like your poem. It reminds me of "I wanna go to that land" "And when i fall asleep at night
let me dream of a land that's a paradise
and when i wake up in the morning
help me bring a peace to earth."
Your poem seems to represent the sad reality of life but it also captures the dream of love and peace. |
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Re: I dreamed
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 08:55:38 PM AEST
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what a beautiful dream... that first line is amazing,
draws one right in, this is just so well written, all my
life from little on i dreamed of living on a mountain with
everyone i love, reality:: i do live on the mountain lol,
hugs, woofies n' love nessa |
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