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nightlong silence
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 27th February 2013 @ 03:14:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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can a shudder render who
I unravel nothing you
a spider without web
seeking names of end
and stories to begin...
quiet stealth.
ming
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2013-02-27 15:14:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: nightlong silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Thursday, 28th February 2013 @ 07:53:28 AM AEST (User
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Hi Ming,
As you know, I struggle to understand .......
but your style still has me in its power.
Tommy
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Re: nightlong silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sagefairy on
Thursday, 28th February 2013 @ 10:35:47 PM AEST (User
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Few words that powerfully sneak along to the tale's end. :-) Interesting way to write, where the single word sort of leads into the next phrase. Nice work!
SF |
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Re: nightlong silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Friday, 12th April 2013 @ 06:51:51 AM AEST (User
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hi ming :)
I love the subtlety & the richness of your words, now & always!
smiles elle |
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Re: nightlong silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by alicewhite on
Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 02:56:36 PM AEST (User
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Forget flash gordon ' its all about ming lol . Once again it feels as if this was intended at the time for the future which is now and to me it makes sense but I wouldn't have got it if I read it back when it was written by you. So awww some and then some. Loving you so much |
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