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Just A Whisper
Contributed by
waynster
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Tuesday, 5th March 2013 @ 02:15:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Just a whisper
a slight sound coming from your lips
A very slight and soft voice
sending me some tips
Trying to be silent
but yet trying to be heard
A whisper is nothing more
than a very soft spoken word
Wanting my attention
seemingly it is hard to do
Probably because
I cant hear those whispers from you
Dont get frustrated with me
maybe I have a hard time to hear
I am not trying to avoid
whispers from you my dear
Reach out and touch me
remind me you are there
So I can turn my head
and your whisper I will hear
Written by author: E. Wayne Searles on 5 March 2013
Copyright 2013 E.Wayne Searles All Rights Reserved
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Re: Just A Whisper
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th March 2013 @ 10:05:37 AM AEST
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That is awesome. I really like the way you wrote a beautiful love poem and simultaneously worked in you're hard of hearing. That's great!
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: Just A Whisper
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by Kailas on
Tuesday, 5th March 2013 @ 09:11:19 PM AEST
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| This is great! I love it, keep on writing :) |
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Re: Just A Whisper
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 6th March 2013 @ 04:24:32 AM AEST
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| i personally see the "whisper" as a metaphor for feelings or thoughts that another person is trying to convey, but sometimes we do need a little help and a push in the right direction. Often i find that people expect unreasonable things in their communication, and this poem embodies that. :) |
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Re: Just A Whisper
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by sanders on
Friday, 8th March 2013 @ 10:57:09 AM AEST
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| really very nice poem.. |
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