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I Woke Up
Contributed by
Seth31
on
Sunday, 10th March 2013 @ 10:31:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I woke up last night panting.
Not once, not twice, but thrice
Because of a dream so real and vivid
My entire psyche became livid
I woke up last night crying.
The thoughts that haunt me have gotten stronger
I don't know if I can fight much longer
They have penetrated my last defense
I woke up last night failing.
It was a nightmare like no other
It exploited my hidden weakness
Leaving me left in pure bleakness
I woke up last night dying.
It ended with me talking to Death
Then everything went frigid and nothing was left
I was stuck in the dream; I couldn't breathe, move, nor see
One might think that waking up would be a blessing
But it's not, for I have taken heed to the ending.
Copyright ©
Seth31
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2013-03-10 22:31:05]
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Re: I Woke Up
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by denofiniquity on
Monday, 11th March 2013 @ 12:14:30 AM AEST
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