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Strange Weather Days
Contributed by
dirty
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Tuesday, 12th March 2013 @ 12:58:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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following this line, this narrative fear of what boils underneath thin lines crackle between beauty and horror
everyday actions, I must work towards everyday life, sinking and sifting through underlying hurricanes, smiles, handshakes
I can see it in a picture frame
there is no calm eye and there is no center
in the next stage there will be no nothing, there will exist no muffled static cellphone questions
I do not believe in this side of me, I cannot see any other side, only some type of vessel, illuminated by strained sunlight
being alive like holding together, like juggling, so many misshaped pieces, all the while beautiful everyday routine numbing strokes, familiar smiles, handshakes
beauty and horror dont stop dancing, like ghosts, possessed waves, we run through town taverns, in search of a center, in search of an eye
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2013-03-12 12:58:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Strange Weather Days
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Wednesday, 13th March 2013 @ 09:16:41 AM AEST (User
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Hi,
Difficult to grasp your exact meaning in this
fine composed piece. I guess that, like so
many, you are describing the eternal pursuit
for a better self, a better life (?)
Let me ask you, did you feel comforted after
writing this? If so then that is the healing
element of writing Poetry.
Enjoyable read.
T
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