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DARK DAY'S
Contributed by
colinb
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Wednesday, 13th March 2013 @ 04:15:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Life's dark day's,
Its a maze,
So very grey,
Knifeing veins,
Blood's heavy rain,
Now a ocean's wave,
Draining the veins,
Eye's drift away,
Becomes a haze,
In a fire's blaze,
Theres no pain,
Hard to explain,
Feeling's are a maze,
Escapeing there's noway,
Trapped in dark day's,
Im not ashamed,
Hell come'ing my way,
Im very afraid.
Colin Bradley.
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colinb
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2013-03-13 16:15:13]
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Re: DARK DAY'S
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 13th March 2013 @ 05:01:46 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: DARK DAY'S
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st May 2014 @ 02:18:19 AM AEST
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lonely and so sad, i'm sorry you felt this way in
this piece, but it is a very strong write! keep
writing!
hugs n' love nessa |
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