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Descent
Contributed by
softlyfalling
on
Sunday, 17th March 2013 @ 04:51:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Descent
An uncanny madness bent the course of light from heaven that day-
The shaft impaled my undefended ego,
And pinned me forever to the chair.
From some dimension, sounds breached the void-
Staccato voices, a crying child, cartoons on the television
And the whining clicks of a camera.
I looked down, just to be certain.
There was no mistake.
I was holding the lifeless body of my infant grandson
Just for one surreal moment
Before I abstracted
Fractured
Vanished
Copyright ©
softlyfalling
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2013-03-17 04:51:03]
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Re: Descent
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 17th March 2013 @ 05:47:38 PM AEST
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This write is heavy duty.
Very powerful.
it's very sad but awesome write.
Blessings, huggs,
emy
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Re: Descent
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by davemus on
Friday, 10th May 2013 @ 03:42:16 AM AEST
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| Very strong emotion. A tragic feeling - so well expressed. |
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