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CONFUSED
Contributed by
colinb
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Sunday, 24th March 2013 @ 04:30:13 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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My life is a illusion,
It's a conclusion,
Mind confusion,
Cell's infusion,
Your amusement,
Might be the solution,
Unsure in what way?
Why you play?
Few word's say,
Care you may,
Abrupt though they stay,
Light you array,
Maybe just a game,
I'm a stray,
Should I be afraid,
Am i your prey.
Colin Bradley.
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colinb
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2013-03-24 16:30:13]
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Re: CONFUSED
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by emystar on
Sunday, 24th March 2013 @ 10:49:28 PM AEST
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very good, friend. It's thought provoking.
Good work.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by LetYourFeelingsOut on
Wednesday, 27th March 2013 @ 03:50:44 PM AEST
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| I love the flow of the peom its very nicely done :) Very well written:)! |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st July 2014 @ 11:09:35 PM AEST
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such loneliness here, you portray a solitude that some
crave for; some long to be away from, this poem
breathes and makes me wonder what you see as you
pen this.....
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: CONFUSED
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 07:42:43 PM AEST
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my life is a Illusion...
love that line
good write..... |
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