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Phoenix
Contributed by
Bigj
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Wednesday, 3rd April 2013 @ 01:56:51 AM in AEST
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She is a bird in the sky. Representing pure beauty Flying above the clouds Trying to escape her insecurities
Unknown to her image The beauty it contains For she was once caged Her heart barely remains.
Her wings were clipped And lost her flight Suffering from the evil of a man Tears followed, unable to fight.
Eventually the prison grew weak And freedom was her only desire. Escaping at a cost. She tries to fly higher
So high, she is unable to be captured fearing love and what it had brought Fearing the cage and the depression with it Fearing the heartbreak she fought
In the skies she flew again. And met me within the sky For I am an eagle with equal fears I once lost flight and almost died.
Captured and abused Lied to and taken advantage of My wings were clipped And I dreamed of the sky above
My feathers grew again. And I began to take flight Fearing the evil of the ground. Fearing love and it's poisonous bite
I have flown the skies for a while And have seen great things. I have learned to not fear love. And above all I protect my wings
Yet we still fly. And I see freedom within her smile Reminding me of the battle I fought. watching her for miles
I will protect this phoenix Keep her flying with me. For flying solo grows old. This she will one day see.
Until then she will heal. And no longer fear the cage because true love flies high. Not within a prison of rage
Take flight beautiful phoenix And mend your broken heart. For the sky is filled with freedom And this eagle will never part
Written by: Justin Ford
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2013-04-03 01:56:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Phoenix
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd April 2013 @ 05:40:04 AM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful write.
loved it.
smiles,
em
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Re: Phoenix
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ingredients on
Sunday, 7th April 2013 @ 04:52:19 PM AEST (User
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I liked it. I thought the first four or five stanzas were the best, the initial capture. Felt a bit sappy at the end. |
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