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Life and Death:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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Saturday, 6th April 2013 @ 07:24:50 AM in AEST
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Should we live ,
or should we die.
Its not up to other to decide.
As individual we must reply.
our overall decision is not to die.
Life and death is in the power of the tongue
becareful what you speak about anyone.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
... [
2013-04-06 07:24:50]
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Re: Life and Death:
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th April 2013 @ 11:27:55 PM AEST
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Indeed they are.
Great writing.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Life and Death:
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by mvvenkataraman on
Sunday, 7th April 2013 @ 11:31:16 AM AEST
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Of course, a valuable advice from a poet
"During day see all the sides and talk
And in the night, do not do even that"
My mother's precious advice to me
I must acknowledge the truth here
And I thank the poet for his advice
I will surely follow that for bliss.
mvvenkataraman
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Re: Life and Death:
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by Ingredients on
Sunday, 7th April 2013 @ 04:44:11 PM AEST
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| I liked this, but the last two lines have an odd feel to them. And using the same rhyme twice is just lazy. Overall good flow though. |
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