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She asked me if i loved her.
Contributed by
Ingredients
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Tuesday, 9th April 2013 @ 03:01:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Allow me to enumerate, subjugate and demonstrate.
To those parts of you which hold doubt.
But first, I must abdicate, on how your words agitate,
all the parts of me which act out.
You talk about eternity, the ageless infinity
But your precocity holds you like a vice in its grip.
You hold its hair back, like girls in sorority.
Desperate to keep it making the slightest of slips.
Don't ask for reason, is there ever any worth hearing?
I can tell you "you're beautiful, with a personality to boot."
But does that really make my words any more endearing?
For me, that is something that your self must refute.
If you had telepathy your thoughts would be a mess.
Sorting out the messages, from thoughts I can't suppress.
Enabling my addiction to your body and your soul.
You would watch my mind, as infatuation takes control.
Faith I have in abundance, in people not in gods.
Charon can take all his coins, and I will take those odds.
I approach with uncertainty. and offer it candidly.
My hand is yours to take, don't take it offhandedly.
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Re: She asked me if i loved her.
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by mick on
Tuesday, 9th April 2013 @ 11:27:30 AM AEST
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| Great poem here |
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Re: She asked me if i loved her.
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by The_Unknown on
Tuesday, 9th April 2013 @ 03:28:39 PM AEST
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I think that this is a very good poem, although... a little wordy for me. But that doesn't mean I don't like it. Good job.
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Re: She asked me if i loved her.
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by Sagefairy on
Thursday, 11th April 2013 @ 09:17:54 AM AEST
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| "If you had telepathy, your thoughts would be a mess." Yes, for some of us, that's how it is. Interesting write. Blessings, SF |
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