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Innervisions In The confusion
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Saturday, 13th April 2013 @ 08:41:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Should I go
or should I stay
it's so insane,
It's been awhile
since
she let me down
still
I feel the pain,
she's got film star features
and she enchanted me with a kiss
from her lips....
If I am willing
am I still a victim
oh emotionally I am melting down,
trapped on this crazy carousel
I am so dizzy
as it spins me 'round and 'round,
help me
I am falling
into the twi-light zone
of the outer limits again....
In a burning confusion
I exist
and it's all so insane,
In this alternate reality
into emotional torture
I watch detached from myself
as I melt
and InnerVisions flow,
resistance is futile
no self disclosure
will release me
from the enchanting kiss
of her lips....
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unknown_utopia
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2013-04-13 08:41:24]
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Re: Innervisions In The confusion
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by karu on
Saturday, 13th April 2013 @ 10:40:42 AM AEST
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| i like the flow of emotion in this poem |
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Re: Innervisions In The confusion
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by Sagefairy on
Saturday, 13th April 2013 @ 11:10:45 AM AEST
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hmmm yeah dizzy. Stuck between pleasure and pain and all that. Like the Star Trek reference (re: resistance). I have none myself I suppose...
yeah - it's insane. Good write!
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Re: Innervisions In The confusion
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th April 2013 @ 09:53:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful even tho it's sad. Any body I know?
huggs, luv, blessings,
emy |
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