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OFFER OF SOUL
Contributed by
karu
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Sunday, 14th April 2013 @ 09:14:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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please accept offer of my soul,
and take full control ,
over each and every part ,
of my heart
as my wife,
for whole duration of my life
please accept offer of my soul
i am giving you the leading role,
in my love story,
help me and take me to the glory,
please be the officer of this heart
and give me the lesson of love art
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karu
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2013-04-14 09:14:06]
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Re: OFFER OF SOUL
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by emystar on
Sunday, 14th April 2013 @ 02:00:06 PM AEST
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Great writing.
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emy |
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Re: OFFER OF SOUL
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by Sagefairy on
Sunday, 14th April 2013 @ 09:11:14 PM AEST
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Love.. is simple. Romance is the art form. That's a sweet write you have and it is very trusting of your other to ask for her guidance. May it turn out well for you!
Blessings, SF |
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Re: OFFER OF SOUL
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 31st July 2015 @ 05:48:35 PM AEST
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| This was unique and Kool! |
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